Monument Soul

not a very unexpected twist in a tale may be even cliche'... but hey,sometimes Royal Red , looks good on the walls so kudos for that. man is more of ...

:lol: "...the friends that love you back will come stay in hell with you." what strange little gadget of a poem we have here. rotating mirrors set on gears and ...

*sigh* cute... you ask questions about little novelties you open a window and show us a landscape the door remains locked... the reader is marroned like a sick child in ...

hmm... the rhymes gnoe right out of me... this poem reminds of some of my own work... I don't know about this, it's based on words of some jerk... some ...

oi!another Blank-Verse!!! it's not even organized like a poem, but I've seen worse. The subject matter seems to jerk about at random. the concept and the content run down hill ...

due to the moderators sharp crack whip, I came over and decided to make a reveiwing trip. so what do we have here!? OOH a Blank-Verse PO-EM!!! I'm very fond ...

that DROP-Dead poetry. I make enough grammar mistakes ast is, so if I ever giver you adive on it ,ignore me. You've definately have defined style about you...now all you ...

(*sigh* it's been a while since I last on this website) this rings true to any writer who has ever written an emotionally charged compsition. the rhyme is functioning properly, ...

This is beautiful, it has everything I'd like to have in my own writing. (check out my writing if you please) this paricular poem is rather similar to a pair ...

This poem sports an adequate metaphor. you did well but you should try a metaphor that's alittle more provacotive. I myself have written poem on hatred but I put in ...

alright, this is some good storytelling, but I feel you add more realism to it. This is supposed to be a story abut Vashoa, but I'm not hearing that much ...

hmm... this is nothing less than the searing ignition to an engaging Historical fiction... the story of the boy with the burning heart and his companion, stoic and sweet lik ...

This is tells me everthing I need to know... I don't understand some of the details but I still like it... I don't like nit-picking so look elsewhere this is ...

nice... I'm glad you took the fre verse route with this literary composition antique rained in the region of the home due to a climate of contempt... but in another ...

8) If it isn't my good friend God!!!.... let's see what you've got here... :? mhmmm :? mhmm :shock: :( .... :) this is good, it's true....it's simple and straight ...